outline of proposal

We decided to make a religious thriller as it was something different for the audience to watch and also living in a religious area it all fitted in well with the plot. What we are going to have is the bible open with some rosary beads in the bible the camera will look at the 10 commandments and zoom into the thou shalt not kill and then move onto the storey , where we will begin with a fallow deer’s head on my abattoir floor we will then have the storey of how it happened. We start of with me getting a syringe ready with a liquid inside and then Hannah is just having a leisurely stroll and ask her to look at a map as I am lost and then I put the needle in her neck and see passes out and goes unconscious, I then put her in the car and take her to a secret location when I attempt to purify her and tie her up. Before this happens somewhere in the script will be a drugs deal with the lad who the victim is going out with. The religious bloke is trying to save her from him and gets envious when he see him with her. After he has locked her in this secret location he then tries to calm her down but she kicks him and he leaves her and locks her up in this place.